User talk:Halphas

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DeSu2RB plot page sandbox

Hello there. I'm here to finally get back to you about your DeSu2 plot synopsis sandbox.

First of all, I do want to sincerely apologize for how long it took for us to respond, especially on my own behalf. I admittedly forgot about your request awhile ago, given how busy everything was for us (and still is) on the wiki.

That said though, I've taken another look at your sandbox. I want to preface that I have still not actually played DeSu2 nor the remake, only the first game. I understand the way the DeSu series approaches routes may complicate the page structure. And that is why I had expressed concern before that the plot page may have to be structured differently. But as far as I can tell from an outsider, the page you wrote is presented in an orderly manner and is well written. Perhaps someone more well-versed in DeSu2 might provide different suggestions for how the page could be structured to better fit the game, but otherwise it seems good to me.

There are two key feedback I can give:

• The section flair quotes (i.e. "Sunday. Children of men seek to turn a proud victory into true triumph.") should not be present. We avoid adding flair quotes on wiki pages as they detract from the encyclopedic presentation of our wiki.
• The trivia also should be on the protagonist's page. Plot pages generally do not have a need for trivia pages in the majority of cases, and either way it would be better suited on the character's own page.

Otherwise, I believe the page is very good and can be mainspaced. You can proceed with copying the content over to the actual plot page, with the recommended fixes. Thank you very much for all your hard work, and again I apologize for how long this took. — RustyVanBurace (talk) 21:05, 16 December 2025 (UTC)

Hey Rusty, thanks for the reply. No worries on the delay. 2 years ago was right when the wiki was hot off of its launch, and I've also been away due to IRL for most of those 2 years: I've only come back quite recently, mostly due to the holidays.

The feedback is much appreciated: past feedback was a bit vague, but your points here are crystal clear and can be easily done.

If there's anything else wiki staff or other users would want in regards to article structure, that feedback is more than welcome. I'm also happy to restructure parts of what I've written if a good system is found. This summary was primarly meant as a trial run to figure out how to handle potentially writing the Plot page for the Septentrione arc which, as you know, is quite complex in its branching and events... Halphas (talk) 02:53, 17 December 2025 (UTC)

DeSu2 plot summary

For your contributions to Megami Tensei Wiki, you have been awarded a Jack Medal by Mistiryshak.

Leaving a medal for you in recognition of your efforts with the DeSu2 plot page. That game is densely packed with story and plenty of alternate routes and I commend you for working hard on it! -- Mistiryshak (talk) 21:18, 2 January 2026 (UTC)

Thanks! Bit worried about the length, but will keep chugging along for now. --Halphas (talk) 02:04, 3 January 2026 (UTC)